by djeroticon
Very exciting rememberances of younger days, I found it fascinating and stimulating, hurry with Part 2!
Coming of age in an era of innocense and simple pleasures.
I am at a loss for words. It is simply amazing. The tension and mystique is tangible! The writing is eloquent, and the story flows with grace. I anxiously await part 2!
I am looking forward to more of this story. Will Rose allow you to fuck her and cum in her? Will you be fucking her during her fertile period without regard for birth control?
I was twelve.My next door neighbor a young married women about twenty grabbed a magazine I had carelessly rolled and put in my back pocket. I was waiting for her nephew who had just left to go shopping with her husband.She later on partied with the two of us her neohew and myself.
The writing is superb. The style is warm, relaxed, and personal. The descriptions are vivid and original. The characters are believable and intimate. The editing is nigh perfect. You take it slow, you make interesting roundabouts, you made me fall in love with Rose.
I simply didn't know a sexually-explicit story could be this good. Thank you.
I'd be willing to bet the percentage of unusual first time sex is fairly high. Getting turned on can happen at any time, and any place. I'm glad you provided this well-written story. Unusual or not, I liked it.
This gentle, sexy tale of a teenager initiated into his first amorous workout is beautifully written, psychologically sound and well paced. That his mentor is a lovely, mature, adult woman who happens to be the lover of his best friend's older brother makes a very solid linchpin for the plot. Now I've just GOT to have the sequels, please!
This amazed me. Not being a doctor of erotic fiction, (DOER?), I am not entitled to know how it came across. Felt as if the author was inside my brain, especially in that age.
I didnt have a friend to go exploring with.
I actually thought that i invented masturbation.
Recreated the temporature using a sink, lubricant which was hard to do seeing as I had no experience, and had to be very careful to not damage the items that had to be returned unblemished. Oh, and my father was the only doctor in town which needed security when buying some stuff. Your descriptions of society mind set, mentality of the beginner even the conversation during the first time seemes if you were there.
Thank you for the work you put in.
Good luck.
Wish i could say nostalgic. Save a modicum of editing, it was well written.
Charming premise.
But sex moves ahead much too fast.
I uderstand that it's his first time, but he cums without almost any real interplay. He really doesn't get to touch her, she hardly touches him except for grinding her pussy on kis knee.
If she was doing this to get him comfortable with women, really needed some touching of each other and instruction what she/women like. How to touch her breasts. Nipples. Ass. Pussy. And some touching of him by her. And some instruction that he should let/make women cum first.
Four stars.
I’m 8 years younger than the character in this story, and I can assure one and all that not much had changed for intelligent, non-athletic 18 year olds by 1972. Everything here looks very familiar. Alas, no Rose for me. It took years of fumbling and bumbling to find my way.