My Very First Time

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Megan26
Megan26
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Daren placed a knee on either side of my head and lowered his balls into my mouth. I was so happy to have something to do, something to focus on. Sarah had moved to my pussy and If Darren's balls weren't in my mouth I would have screamed. I was making these panting almost crying sounds that I couldn't believe were coming from me. Sarah was making something happen with her tongue (I hadn't ever had an orgasm before this), I could feel myself convulsing, I was gushing so badly, for a minute I thought I was peeing.

Sarah was kissing my pussy now. My clit was so tender, that whenever she brushed it I jumped. I could focus a bit now and saw Darren's hard cock. It was huge (it really wasn't, but it was the only hard cock I had ever seen, so it looked huge then), for some reason I told him I was a virgin. He smiled, moved to my ear and said don't worry my baby Megan, when I am done, you still will be. I remember being somewhat relieved, again I had no idea why. Sarah moved up and pulled me up to face her, she started kissing me again. She leaned back and brought me with her. I was now on top of her and I kissed her mouth, her chin, her neck and I moved to her breasts. They were beautiful, firm and her nipples were rock hard. I sucked them and flicked them with my tongue.

Darren had moved in behind me and started to kiss on my ass. He kissed the bottom of my cheeks and I was surprised how good it felt. I moved down Sarah's hard belly to her belly button and licked it a bit. I knew I needed to taste her. I couldn't think of anything else, so I moved to her inner thighs. This brought my ass up and Darren to full advantage. He licked and kissed my asshole. Somewhere in the back of my mind I was surprised by this, but I needed, badly to taste Sarah. When I finally got to her pussy, I inhaled hard. She had this sweet musty smell that didn't smell anything like my pussy. She smelled like moist heat with a mix of some perfume. My tongue moved to her wet slit and I felt my whole body jerk. I wanted so badly to please her. I started running my tongue up her lips, and oh my god, I thought her mouth was soft. This was like velvet. She was clean shaven and open. I ran my tongue back up her slit for more of her essence when Darren pierced my ass with his tongue. I was jolted but pleased.

I found Sarah's clit and started to tease it. She was moaning now. Darren was pushing something against my asshole and it hurt, but it seemed like it wasn't real. Then there was pressure, intense pressure. I concentrated on Sarah's clit. Watching her body quiver when I brushed my tongue across it, was fueling my fire. I was feeling myself getting wetter. My thighs were sticky. I started to rhythmically rotate my pelvis and push against the pressure. My tongue was darting faster and faster over her clit. Sarah was moaning louder and louder.

Something, the pain, the pleasure, my emotions, everything was so confusing. Darren pushed his cock into my virgin ass. I screamed. Did it hurt? Was it pleasure? Sarah was going to climax. My head was spinning. Darren was fucking my ass; he was fucking it fast and hard. Was I cumming? Sarah dug her nails into my shoulders. Did that hurt? I don't know. Sarah is cumming. I moved lower and licked her wetness. Fuck, I thought. Darren was pounding me now. He gave one last thrust and grunted. He stayed there for a minute and pulled out. I rolled on my side, laying my head on Sarah's inner thigh. I was so fucking spent.

I lay there for a few minutes breathing hard and I had this stupid thought. They didn't care that my breasts are small. I smiled to myself. Darren came down and kissed me on the cheek. Nice touch Megan, shaving your pussy like that. I sat up and so did Sarah. She asked me if I was still having a bad night. I hugged her and said no, thanks to you.

Sarah and I are still friends today. We sometimes talk about this time we had together, although if she knew I was sharing it with you she may not be happy. She is a mom now and a great one. Her wild days are behind her and she tells me she needs to keep it like that.

I hope you liked my story and maybe I will write another one if you would like. Hey I spent 4 years in college after all!

Megan

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bobhardcastlebobhardcastle10 minutes ago

Your grammar and punctuation for your first time were fine. You just need to keep on writing and I"m sure the writing will flow much smoother. And I hope you didn't use Darren and Sarah's real names, as yes, that may clue anyone in that knows you exactly who it was (of course). Give your characters made up names and I'm sure you'll be fine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hi!

This is my first time writing a comment, so sorry if I get grammar or punctuation wrong...

That was basically what you said, and I have to say you have much better punctuation, capitalization, and spelling than some people. You would not believe how much that matters, it's hard to find a story sexy if you keep having to reread to tell where each sentence ends, and if you keep criticizing the page. The only quibble I have is that you didn't use quotations, but in many parts it was train-of-thought or just unnecessary so it didn't bother me. I liked the story, and sort of hope it's real although I doubt some of it.

MaturinMaturinover 13 years ago
great story

I loved how your story seems completely believable and yet is amazingly hot. Please share more of your early experiences.

I didn't find your grammar or whatever interfered with my enjoyment of the story, perhaps it made it even added verisimilitude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Editors help for free

This was an excellent story that could have been better if one of the very capable, free editors had been asked to help with the mechanics. It is a "5" in waiting, but for me grammar and spelling errors disrupt my experience of the story, so only a 4. Keep writing, especially if the content of your stories are this good, but please send them to an editor! Lonelylover50

Megan26Megan26over 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your kind words.

I really thought I would take a beating on this story, but I have received kind words from most of you. Even when I get criticism, it has been very cordial and kind.

Thank you for reading my story.

Love Megan

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