by scouries
an excellent storie continue it so they all get together in the end
Over the top - what a strange story. I usually don't read let alone like incest stories, but somehow this one works.
dude you have to write some more of this one damn i could not stop reding it i will give you a hundred on this one
dude you have to write some more of this one damn i could not stop reding it i will give you a hundred on this one
Unfortunately, too many anti-Asian rumors exist about the Vietnam war, and this story runs them up big time. However, there are also too many truths about how couples were broken up, especially at the end of the war. To read about the chaos that the end created, read White Christmas in April by my father Toby Haynsworth.
OK, is this story good? Hell Yeah! The idea of fucking your granddaughter unknowingly is far fetched, but it is well done.
story. I am surprised only one anti-Vietnam peacenik crawled out from under a rock to complain.
Families have close relatives on both sides were common, which "hurt" our efforts to do background searches on workers to give security clearances.
too many things too real.
Very good outline and twist. I cant wait to read the second chapter!!!
Nice build up to the next Chapter. Waiting for you to finish the next installment. Excelent start to a good storyline, contrary to what others would have you believe.
Thank you.
This was most intriguing.
I really like your abrupt style and your non apologetic approach to this.
Thank you for a great story. Please, do write more.
-Pultoy
I enjoyed the story! I found it very hot,very sexy and by the time I finished reading it I realized my panty was wet!I am looking forward to reading the next installment!
I quote - I turned slowly to face the offending noise, and was blinded for a second by the sun shining over her shoulder, but then simply panicked when I recognized the silhouette. – offending noise? I thought it was a voice? ‘but then simply panicked’. Um. Wouldn’t it be ‘and panicked’? Why simply? Really, you seem to have a very fertile imagination – maybe you can learn how to put it on paper.
I don't know which is worse, this pile of bigotted garbage masquarading as a story or the readers who thought this was a wonderful story.
the Ct. Yankee
I was there for three years.. I didn't us any protection because I was a dum young kid. I grew up fast and started being like the story. I learned my B&D and S&M roots there and there still with me to this day. I flash back sometime late at night when I set and looking up at the stars. Thinking back when I see some stars remembering the lovely and young and fun time with the mom-sone and daughters. I would like to know if there still there but I don't think I will every find out..
Write the story... Tho it's not TRUE It's still enjoying reading.
I would like to use my Biker and Master name but with the way this world is going to many people know to much and try and us things agains us. SO I will sign Anonymous
Jim, your latest writing is truly a masterpiece!!!!It definitely needs to have at least five chapters for completion. The possible plots and sub-plots are endless,and the anticipation soooooo exciting. Please,please continue this wonderful story.
Loved it. This is the best story I have read today and I've almost read them all. Thanks again.
Jim,
You know you want to write the next chapter. Are you as conflicted as Sam? Or should turn the female equivalent of Joe loose on you? Write the thing!
great sexual and fun stories hard to beat.you the best at writing them.
Wow Jim that was great! You’ve done it again giving us interracial love together with hot incestuous coupling and you did it oh so beautifully. Such a clever plot deserves a continuation and I eagerly await a sequel about Joe and his Vietnamese family. Pete.