All Comments on 'My Vietnamese Granddaughter'

I loved your story. I 'd like to read more chapters.

Five stars

Part 2 never happened it pretty much laid out however you want to imagine it.We find out Sam is Joe's granddaughter,who was related directly to Kim and Han,but Joe somehow reunited with them and married Kim and Han both and even has marriage certificates.

So if you want to just imagine that Sam kept their blood relation a secret from her sister Cyn and thereby Kim and Han then Joe and Sam could show up in California where Kim and Han live and shock the hell out of them by telling them Joe is her Boyfriend/Grandfather and both Kim and Han can be with Joe after so many years apart.Also Sam and Cyn can become part of Joe's Family Harem.And also Joe could get both his Granddaughters pregnant like he did with Kim and Han.And all of them lived happily ever after.

Too bad there has not been a second chapter, or more, written. I hope the author is still alive, has just dropped out for a while.

What to say about the "edgy" shit in here...oh, well, makes for a different read, that is about it...🥴😳😱

Still, five Stars...just 'cause...

You never wrote part two. I've checked many times. Sad.

I loved your story. I can identify with some of the characters in the story as I'm a Vietnam Vet and loved the Vietnamese pussies I had. Their tits are just right, also, as you remarked. I hope you write a second part.

I really hope that you continue this story. Each chapter centered on Joe's interactions with his long lost family.

Will there be a sequel? The story was beautiful

Damn good story...please continue...you are a good writer

The writing was good but the story suffered because you didn't go into everything enough except the primary couple and that was rushed. The plot deserves more chapters to breathe. B

"THIS BASTARD HAD THE ROOMS SET UP FOR VIDEO AND AUDIO.....POOR FUCKING TRASH.....PATHETIC THAT THE WRITER CONDONES THIS TO PUT IT IN A STORY!!"

XD Guess that means Anon is condones polygamy, rape, and incest; but woe unto he who writes about a creepy voyeur.

THIS BASTARD HAD THE ROOMS SET UP FOR VIDEO AND AUDIO.....POOR FUCKING TRASH.....PATHETIC THAT THE WRITER CONDONES THIS TO PUT IT IN A STORY!!

Very well done. I look forward to part 2.

Bill S.

Amazing

Great story I’ll look forward to the sequel

Hi Jim, stay alive if for nothing else we need more stories and the continuation was long overdue a decade ago. Please if you die before completion have your descendents read this and publish the rest for you (and us).

What are Kim and Han going to say when their granddaughters shows up with big bellies and their grandfather?

Could they demand that Kims son and Joes granddaughter gets married in return for accepting Joe as the head of their house. And how are they going to get the American granddaughter to submit to that arrangement. You say they found her in a BDSM club? She's gay?

I was surprised that the Truongs escaped by sea. With contacts in the golden triangle they should be able to get out by Thailand.

Joes superhuman stamina robed the story of many opportunities for diversity and depth.

The absurd surveilance level were boring and immature. You should have been able to give us Samanthas angle with less.

Please don't fall into the trap of introducing more characters instead of giving the ones you have more depth. A sole man is useless as a boyfriend to 20 girls. He'll never have time for a meaningful relationship with any of them and that'll be the story.

Ahhh, it's been so long, and I'm still patiently waiting, holding out hope for a part two, and three, hehehe, to magically show up!! I wonder if they will... Hell I wonder if Scouries is still alive...

Anyway, magically delicious!!

Story got me to thinking of a Viet Nam vet friend I had made some twenty something years ago in AA. He had his issues too. The funny thing that sticks in my head when I think of him was his toilet paper stash! Hoarder, prepper, or sheer bad memories, he was covered though! Spare empty room in his house, closet full of toilet paper and a stack of those monster packs in the corner too! Big three bedroom house and he owned an exercise machine, a tv, a recliner, a kitchen table and chairs, a bed and a bass boat! That's it! Simple needs, hehe.

Interesting to deal with that subject. I suppose that there were many children born after such love affairs in Asia or Germany or France, or any other country where military forces are far from their hometown. The history of kid is generally difficult and poorly known. This story provides a funny version. Not so funny actually but good ending one. The variation of the topic handled by the author is amazing. This is so captivant to read you. Thanks.

i cannot wait for chapter 2,3 & 4 even hurry please

Looking for more of this story. I gave my virginity to an Okinawan bar girl when I was twenty. I think she was 8 to 10 years older than me. We had a thing off and on for 18 months. Of course that time was interspersed with other trysts.

I loved the tenderness in this story. Beautiful and shocking and intense. Would love to read a sequel. Would suggest keeping the love between Joey and Sam special or at least Cynthia only once in their relationship but definitely not “reconnecting” with the rest of his family that way. I think your story is beautiful and erotic on its own doesn’t need polyamorous storyline.

The Army sent me to many countries and continents. Whenever I hear Roger Whittaker singing "The Last Farewell," it pulls on a heart string. My American wife spent the first 20 years of our marriage wondering if some kid would show up at our door asking for me. I don't know of any children, but I would remember his/her Mother.

Where's part 2 and the rest?

OMG I loved this story! I need more. Please write a sequel to this. How far you take it is up to your writer's mind. My suggestion at least reconnect with Kim and Han and possibly the children and the other grandchild. Cant wait to read it!!!!

Very good read this needs a second chapter at least

Yes, I want to see more about the sisters and their grandfather...

loved it I was in Vietnam 67- 68 I have loved Vietnamese women ever since just couldn't

find 1 to marry when I returned to the states.

Excellent story kind of leaves you hanging though definitely needs a part 2

I have rated this story 5 stars; after I started I could not put it down. Very intrigued with the ins and outs of the relationships.

When can we have a part 2? The story needs a proper conclusion and the meeting of the protagonists. Plus, the drawing together of his US family.

Great Story Loved It

Chase

Aside from the incredible odds against an American soldier with two lost Vietnamese wives meeting and fucking one of his granddaughters in America, 40 years later, it's also improbable that: 1) the soldier would become a ranting anti-Vietnamese racist; 2) he would spy on all of his tenants for years with high-tech equipment and never be discovered by anyone; and 3) his Vietnamese-American granddaughter would want him to fuck her beloved sister as well as herself, and would not feel obliged to tell her sister who this man really was in their family's history before even introducing them to each other.

Nevertheless, you are quite a storyteller, and your skills enable us to overlook the improbabilities and enjoy "My Vietnamese Granddaughter" anyway. Thank you.

I read that story the second time.

don't remember the time when i discovered it first.

rated it like 5 (this time)

best ever!

you're a great author so i would like to complimet you more, but, as you have alredy guessed, I'm not english or american tongue, so i just copied the comment of someone annonymous that i want to add to my words

thanks annonymous and take my appology for copying without asking you first but i couldnot have formulated that any better:

A God amongst mere mortals....

First, let me bow to your greatness Sir. I can honestly say YOU are the great American hero; or at least mine! I couldn't help but hang on every word. I like how you gave some background info as that part of the story started to develop. It brings clarity to the bigger picture in my head & helps with character development & whatnot. I swear, this has got to be one of the best, if not the best, story I've ever read or heard of. If I was you, I'd go buy a fuckin lottery ticket cuz you're so goddamn lucky...goddamn rat-bastard, I'm jealous!

You can't leave me hanging like this, to hell with everyone else, if even only for me, you gotta finish it & damn, I hope it finishes the way I'm hoping...you, 8 titties & 4 dripping wet pussies begging for that angry inch!!

A tip of the hat to you Sir, for you are a God amongst mere mortals!

First, let me bow to your greatness Sir. I can honestly say YOU are the great American hero; or at least mine! I couldn't help but hang on every word. I like how you gave some background info as that part of the story started to develop. It brings clarity to the bigger picture in my head & helps with character development & whatnot. I swear, this has got to be one of the best, if not the best, story I've ever read or heard of. If I was you, I'd go buy a fuckin lottery ticket cuz you're so goddamn lucky...goddamn rat-bastard, I'm jealous!

You can't leave me hanging like this, to hell with everyone else, if even only for me, you gotta finish it & damn, I hope it finishes the way I'm hoping...you, 8 titties & 4 dripping wet pussies begging for that angry inch!!

A tip of the hat to you Sir, for you are a God amongst mere mortals!

P.s: I live in Southern California, probably right by your ladies (if they're by little Saigon = garden grove/westminister)

Believable enough for me :). ...well except the part about all the girls he slept with over there being over eighteen, lol. Gotta meet the boards requirements though, lol.

I would LOVE to see a part two of this!! Its been a long time since Ive read this and havent seen it pop up so I hope you still have the rough draft handy! :)

...few enough asian stories on here. I dont know where I picked up my asian love and fetish, hell, Im still trying to figure out how in the hell I married a wide hipped pale white girl, lol.

Not quite fully believable but continue.

I cant wait for chapter two hope u post it soon

I would like to read the next chapter.

Love your stories. I just hope you forgot to post the chapter since it was so long ago.

If not please consider doing it. Thanks anyway :)

hope you get to write chapter 2 sometime soon . see you later. bob w.

Also a Nam vet though Tonkin Gulf Yacht Club. One of the guys who worked for me found out he had a 13 year old daughter working a bar in the Philippines. This is a tale of lust, and love. There's nothing wrong with that.

Your stories are about people. Real people like the ones I know. You give me a very high standard to shoot for in my own writing.

Thanks

I can hardly wait for chapter 2 !!!!!

Great read I hope part two is just as good

Loved your story, can't wait to read what should follow...

Anyway, thank you for writing a good story.

I enjoyed this tale and would like to read more. Pleased to see you use CUNT for the female genitals -- most of your compatriiots seem to avoid this word, using the childish PUSSY instead! Keep on writing, your output's always good Cheers, John.

I'm a Viet Nam vet and I loved this story. I NEED the next chapter NOW! PLEASE!

Part 2 yes please!

It was a wonderful story and I would love for you to continue with it. I know it's been a long time since you posted the story. I hope you will write some more or at least tie up the loose ends.

nice i was a crew chief centril highlands 1972

One of best stories,can you write part 2 or even more

This is great. It's got some nicely thought out background, and some very hit sex. I'd love to read another chapter or three about Joe and his granddaughters.

Surprised at how good that felt, can (almost) feel her body against mine. Very glad that he maintains the fitness of his cock. It helps Love to conquer Fear.

But where would the story be without your imagination.

just read it, wow! can't wait for you to continue.a vietnam vet

I"m intrgued to find out what happens when Joe meets Han and Kim again. Please write more.

A very emotional and gripping story. I love the transition of the main character from an old ugly perverted racist to a sad man who was deprived of the family he truly wanted, and finally regaining some of that through his granddaughter. I love stories that leave the reading guessing for him/herself what will happen next but like the other people before me, I wouldn't mind a sequel (especially the reunion with Han and Kim). I feel Asian stories (good ones at least) are hard to come by here, and I was glad I accidentally stumbled into this one :-)

great story line. good flow and decent sex. i prefer shorter asian women, but they'll do. time to write chapter 2. thank you.

Greate story. Inquiring minds wants to know what happened next.

MY goodness....you really need a part 2.....the dreams I have of a followup...PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!

I see that the orignal was written back in 2007, its 2012 don't you think time to submit the secondhalf. I rated this story 5 stars, wonderful to the 10th power

YOU KNOW YOU HAVE TO PLACE A BOW ON THIS HOWEVER MAKE SURE HE TAGS UP THE REST OF THE CLAN AND ALLOW HIS SO TO TAG HIS BLOND HAIR DAUGHTER AND COEDS... NOW GET TO WRITING MY IMAGINATION IS WAITING

Very nice and unique looking forward to the next part

when is part two coming out

Mr. Scouries, it has been quite some time and no part 2. this is a great story and needs proper attention. lol, you should not be such a great writer. Do you have any ideas of when this story will have a long and wonderful followup? thanks larry

you took me back on a journey I traveled long ago.... Beautiful, well done brother.... keep the faith and write sequels.... I am actually back in Nam working now and enjoying...

Please write story ending...

I absolutly loved this, I'm surpriesed a part 2 is not up already. This story was fantastic and a cliffhanger too. As you have seen with the other comments we all want to read more about what will happen with Sam Cyn and there family. Hope to read some more of this soon =]

When you do the sequel (PLEEEZE) I'm afraid that you'll find that another is required. This storyline could tie up an awful lot of time so I'd understand if you never get the second part written. I'll be disappointed, but I'll understand. Thanx for the effort.

im about to reread this badass piece of fiction i want a sequel if you can muster it but i understand if you for whatever reason cant but if it was left up to me you would be writing 2 additional chapters 10 pages each lol lots of time with the grannies and with the grand daughters ... hell yeah haha both intimate and not i enjoyed the hell out of this story the first time i read it was severly disappointed when i didnt find a sequel when i finished , yeah only thing that i dont like about your writing is there isnt enough of it haha

Read this a long time ago and after re-reading it again, still waiting for a sequel. Great story, but only half done at best.

Great story. Hope to maybe read a dirty uncle type story from you. ;)

Mate, it would be great if you completed the next part of this story. I think "Jasmin" liked it even more than I did. It's the forbidden part that makes her so horny after reading it. Thanks for the good writing with few, if any, errors. A pleasure to read. Please continue.

Jim, Thanks again for another fine piece. You masterfully allow your readers to get right into the story.

Would love to read a Part 2, there really is much more material here.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS !!!!! PART 2 PLEASE!!!!

Jim, I must have read this story 5 times!! I have always loved it. It has its very touching moments, and also its sexy moments. While I missed being drafted by a year, I have lived in Asia now for 27 years, but have never been to Vietnam as my focus has always been on China. A most beautiful story... and while it has been 2 years and you have moved on to many other excellent stories, I for one would love to see you dust it off and write Chapt. 2 and 3 or whatever you can manage. Thank you

I was in a completely different aspect of the war.....Navy gunship going up rivers to support ground troops and Green Beret outposts(1965-66). But I have sweet memories of the young Vietnamese pussy I enjoyed on our rare Liberty opportunities.

I love your story and have no criticism, but being the consumate pussy licker, would love a more detailed description of you sucking these sweet pussies to many orgasms.

Great Work!!

loved it....was there in '73....please write more

I wasn't too sure at the beginning because of the ethnic slurs, but I understood the context. Now one of my favourites. Your writing is exemplary.

Write more please...

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEASE CONTINUE THIS!!!!

Nice job, the characterization and description was good. Like Hongluobo, the jingo racism and hi-tech peeping almost turned me off - I'm glad I continued, because there's some deep thought in this one - I can see this guy, recoiling from what he wants, but can't have, and going the other way completely.

Wa-a-ay better story than you usually see in a porn site, almost an x-rated version of, say, "Gran Torino" or "Miss Saigon" - not that they're in any way derivative of those stories, but you've explored the same kind of themes here.

Very,very nice work. Just a suggestion - if you cleaned this up, took out the incest, and say made it into a story where this PTSD-burned high tech peeping Tom, say, simply discovers that Samantha is his grand daughter, maybe snaps back something in Vietnamese, starts dealing with his PTSD and re-unites with his Asian family (grin-maybe make it one Viet girl) I think this would be a saleable story. Something like an alternative ending to "Miss Saigon", or, for that matter, the "Lt Dan" subplot in "South Pacific"

I am not puffing smoke, dude, there's the roots of a good mainstream story here.

wish I'd thought of it. Jeeze, I can see a really good, marketable story here. If you need a co-author, I'd be glad to help,man.

...Wow....been a feist the last few days reading all these stories you have written,.. Scouries this one is a gem,..i sure hope you continue this story..on and on and on and on...thank you so much for the entertainment,...much, much better than going to the movies...

where is part 2 by now you should of had more than 2 pages of ideas. Thanks Mike from Texas.

While slightly younger than your character, I didn't go incountry until '69, it revived memories. Thank you

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!

sweet and hot.. but the jingoistic racism was a bit annoying. I know I know.. essential for the plot and he certainly came around a bit... I definitely would love to see a chapter 2 with a reunion with Kim and of course Cyn's deflowering...

please continue this storyline. there are so many possibilities.

Something about this story was incredibly hot. Probably my fav so far! I hope you'll continue! :)

Sounds a lot like me when I was in Thailand. Would still love to reconnect with her.

Thought it was really great. We need another chapter - preferably now.

First, Please continue this lovely story. Next, what a hot, sexy, and beautiful storyline. This is my favorite story of yours so far. Tremendous work on recalling Vietnam and piecing together the stories you heard growing up with your own material. I felt as if I could really see the picture of the pool when Sam saw it. The sex scenes were ultra steamy. Certainly some of the best I have read of yours. It reads like you really enjoyed writing it too. Thank you.

don't kill the story as soon as I read the title and trailer on the author's page. Would have been a killer story if I had discovered their relationship in the third page/chapter.

a near 60 year old guy cums 5 times with Sam in less than 24 hrs? Even with Viagra, you're still smoking dope if you believe that. While your writing is very good, another error is the guy's mental state. At 60, his thoughts and actions are described in the same way as when he was 18. Rough, tough, and crude have to mellow at least a little over the years. He is so preoccupied with sex (young sex)that in today's world, he would be on several states' sex offender list. As a follow-on thought, instead of being politically correct with all participants being 18 or over, tell the truth about how it was in-country. You stated, "The girl coulda been anywhere from eighteen to thirty-six. I didn't have a clue." The truth would have been she could have been anywhere from fifteen to twenty-five. I will agree that it was usually impossible to tell in the oriental culture. In the coming chapters/stories, please don't screw every woman that shows up. His reunion with Han and Kim and the kids should not end up in an orgy; give him a little dignity for once.

Dude, that was awesome. I cant wait for the next installment.

This story was awesome, never mind the length. I can't wait to read the next one!!!!

Raw crude and fantastic I loved it.

Had me so hard I could have squashed a flea with my cock.

Can't wait till you split her sister.

Can't wait for the second part!

I LOVED THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for more. This story has so many neat ways to go.

PLEASE give your readers a "forever after" or "Or oh SH**!"

I am fairly new to the site an rreeaalllly enjoy

your work..

Thanking you in advance..Rick (nor cal usa)

The thing about love that makes it so special is that even when a guy acts like a jerk, a woman can love him. As a veteran of Viet Nam, I loved this story. It rang true, just as Joe rang Sam's bell.

Nookiehunter

continue the story of the vietnamese grandaughters to include the grand mothers coming stateside to see you!

Your writing has improved significantly I am pleased to note and say.

Your characters are varied and remain consistent throughout the story.

I only noted one grammmatical error, not uncommon here -- the use of plural instead of possessive, e.g., "famalies" instead of "family's".

I look forward to your continuing sequels to this tale.

Please comtinue with this story... it was well written and got the juices flowing

Well written, with a great storyline. Do continue with part 2!

Ill really like part 2 ... and 3!