All Comments on 'My Wife is So Hot! Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I thought it was Okay untill the room service bit.

I then skipped to the end. I don't think I will read your other chapters. I don't really want to know about your modest wife becomeing a slut and you watching it happen. But enjoy yourselves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep Going!

Keep this story going. Very hot! Ignore what that other comment suggests, that you write according to HIS taste. Let him write his own fucking stories and please himself. I hope she'll continue to develop and explore other men and enjoy their cum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
There is nothing erotic about

this story. It's the same crap over and over again. Shy wife who has had one or no lovers experiments with other men to "see if she likes it" What the fuck? She married the goofball, she had his kids, something tells me they did something right and probably more than once. Fuck, write a better story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Kids?

Thats to bad, they are acting like collage fuck buddies as it is. Is stupid hubbie getting any or is he just standing around like a big dummy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
your story is so hoooooot

the way you discribe the cum scene was really great so much well writen with great details i wish you could slow the action a little and give us little more of the thoughts of this hot wife . the first part was great keep rockin

and something else ignore the usual incest lovers and their rude comments

fordcurryfordcurryabout 15 years ago
Horny Wifey!

I enjoyed the story, fun to read about a hot wife becoming a truly horny slut for hard cock. Hope to read more soon, and I hope she has a lot more fun that evening, displaying herself, etc.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
I think she is getting him set up for the finally

I think her real plan is to have the young stud plug her pussy full of hard cock while her husband watches. Thanks....Rich

1jbm1jbmover 13 years ago
Hot story, more

Hi,

I enjoyed your story and want to see the next chapter

Joe

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Word of the day

Champagne not Champaign.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More Please

Sounds like a fun night is ready to happen.

SoCaNoCaSoCaNoCaabout 3 years ago

I enjoy reading about the joy of having a good time

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story! More please!

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