by PottersWheel
There will be those that will complain that it was too long;for me it was just right! For what appears to be your first submission, it was excellent! Looking forward to your future work! Well done!
Found Memories
Your story gave me found memories of a similar love in my life. Oh how I want to repeat the story in my life
The most intense erotica I've read in many years...more please!
This is how a story should be written;warm,passionate,full of love and hot tender lust.A similar thing happened to me a few years ago and this story evoked some bittersweet memories.Look forward to your next submission.
This is probaly the best story that I have read in a long time. It tells about the feelings of the two people.
I concur with the previous comments and l0k forward to be able to read your stories
Terrific--slow and descriptive--paints a beautiful picture--Wonderfully sensuous.
Love takes alot of real effort. Too many people just want to slam and run. These two people wanted to really court one another. How old fashion, and wonderful.
omgosh, that is the hottest thing i have read here - building up over time and not going right for the fucking right away!! and appreciating a woman with curves! :) thank you!!
I hope this happened to you. What a wonderful fantasy.
The author of this story has a real flair for writing great Romantic drama. Although placed in the Mature category, it is really a passionate romance. Although this reader would have preferred the story to involve younger singles with no adulterous element, this is nevertheless a great love story. It has drama, love, passion, romance, engaging characters, and an excellent plot, perfectly balanced enhanced by tender love scenes. This is a well-crafted and well-written story.
I've read & come back to this series several times through the years. Easily the hottest love story I have ever read!
Good premise.
Certainly not rushed.
Would have preferred more 'normal' preliminaries/foreplay before moving on to pussy and eventually cock.
More in the way of seduction rather than just slipping down a slippery slope.
Maybe even a bit of touching/playing with/licking her asshole.
Nevertheless, five stars.