All Comments on 'My Wife's Best Friend'

I know there are many people into bondage ( majority of them women )

But even in a marriage , Its very very hard to allow yourself to be willingly tied up and have no control . Trust is a big issue on this one and few of us take the chance , even with a spouse .Good story though .

Read both your stories - they both stink. Don't give up your day job

Some folks like character development and other a stroke story. I like a bit more character development but that's my choice. You have the ability to make good word images and possibly the talent to take the stories farther. This writing appears to be end of the story, how did it start? Just a thought...

The story was going ok until you decided to have the character just ram his cock into Sarah's ass that isn't how you do it you can hurt the person doing that and it just ruined the story.

to pay any attention to ass hole anonymous messages about anything. Including mine. So what! No character building, get over it. What teacher was fired so you could grade the papers? As for jamming into an ass that's fired up, gaping and ready to take it? She would have said no if no was needed. Most people will enjoy the fantasy just as it was written, keep writing. Thanks

For a short story I don't miss the character development so much. Nothing happened that required us to know the characters. What I do miss is the sex development. It felt like you were writing fast to get it over with. He fucks one, he fucks the other, he fucks one's ass, then he fucks the other's ass. One minute per position? The sex is the whole focus of the story and it didn't sound very enjoyable. The Kama Sutra is an erotic book but if you carry out sex by jumping from one position to the next it's not really that good. Take a little more time with the sex for your next story.

I was really pleased to see a story where the guy is tied up by surprise and the wife actually treats him right. So many of these stories use it as precursor to some type of revenge. This was for an erotic surprise. Very enjoyable.

I DID FIND THE SEX TO BE SOME WHAT RUSHED.. BUT STILL INTERESTING..IN THE LATE 70s MY WIFE TIED ME TO THE BED .. SHE UNKNOWN TO MYSELF INSERTED A CHERRY FLAVORED LIFE SAVER INTO HER SELF... SHE THEN SET ON ME ..THIS WAS KINDA WILD & I GOT A BIT CARRIED AWAY .. WAS LICKING IN WAY TO FAR & DISLODGED THE LIFE SAVER .. WHICH RESULTED IN MY CHOKING.. AS I FOUGHT TO BREATH SHE STARTED REALLY ENJOYING MY EFFORTS.. THE MORE I FOUGHT THE GREATER HER PLEASURE BECAME...(I STILL COULD NOT GET ANY OXYGEN)SO I DID THE ONLY THING I COULD DO ....I BIT HER,WE NEVER DID THAT AGAIN..HADN'T THOUGHT ABOUT THAT FOR YEARS ...THANKS 4 THE MEMORY..YES I LIKED YOUR SUBMISSION..JO

.... and why would you listen to someone saying to ignore all comments on a comment driven website.Good start but Kamatlock and Jason correct re foreplay.

which just wasn't long enough.

and fucked him up the ass with a strap on. Then it would have been hot. Plus it would have been more realistic that way. This story is bullshit, stuff like that doesn't happen in real life.

Hi, for me-dialogue makes the story, and makes it believable. This story would have been over the top with the right love talk going on during the action.

Where da fuck did he get so much cum ? Doeshe have horse balls?

So his wife without talking to her her husband just decides to bring her BFF into their sex life? The assumption that all men dream of having a threesome is simply ludicrous. Did she ask her friend to get a Doctor's certificate to show she was free of any std's? What happens to their marriage when Tom decides Sarah is MUCH better in bed than his wife? Stupid story with no thought given to any consequences.

1 star

Just as bad as.It would have been if the sexes were reversed.