by Calvin427
I agree with previous poster - the anonymous asses that don't like a particular genre and have to rip it apart. If I don't like a story I just don't comment on it. Take heart though. I wrote a story a few days ago and received some very good votes and pissed others off. Someone said I was doing a good job with those type of responses. Don't let these comments get you down.
very good start, as for the buttheads, who knew they could read?
Why do you self righteous idiots read these stories? You know how they're going to end yet you have to sit in judgment. It's fantasy and if you can't handle it go read Mother Goose stories.
I know your build up from your other stories, this one is toning up to be a beauty me thinks
Let's get to part 2 and get the little slut fucked. Mancelt.
She's playing a dangerous game, some men don't take too well if they get teased all night then not score some pussy. Thanks for the story.....Rich
Butte is my hometown. I moved away in the sixties. I started reading this story because of the Butte connection, but quickly lost interest. I guess it's not really my kind of story.
Like to make our opinions as public as you sexual deviants do.