All Comments on 'My Young Cousin'

very good description. Specially with exciting "bangla" sentences.

Want more.

Slow at places. Majority do not know the writer's native language and find it as interruption in the flow of reading. Description is very close to reality except sleeping peacefully after all that exitement of sucking the nipples, that action normally builds up more exitement and one likes to move to next stage and eventually towards orgasm.

Overall a good story. There was no need to insert brief encounter with mother.

Author is capable of taking reader for ride in the world where whole things can be seen through naked eye. Fantastic graphic details.

We liked the way you seduced your young cousin. Love your graphic description of the events and it turns us on to read your well written stories and also enhance our sexual life. We would love to read about your escapades with your boss and your mom.

Thanks Ruby for the pleasure you give us through the lovely and very sexy stories.

My Grandfather told me many years ago that "the best of women will seduce the mind and the body will follow" You are clearly the type of woman he was thinking of. I've read 3 of your stories now and am going to take a break. They are much too good to rush.

It was a great pleasure to come upon a new story by rubysen.Without a doubt you are a champion at writing a seductin scenario.I thought particularly realistic was the writers hesitation at each step of taking the seduction futher.We all have second thoughts about whether the next step will be seen as going too far or that it might turn off the other person

Also your very detailed physical descriptions,make it so easy to visualize the people involved

Robert in Florida

awesome awesome simply one of the best ruby u r undisputably da naughtiest[bodomaash]

With a delightful slow buildup of events. There is nothing quite like the taste of another woman, especially a succulent young woman.

Ruby,

the way you write stories is some thing probably only a bengali can do - i love that bengali inscript in your stories, really, as you say in your bio, gives extra kick. I liked the flowery language you use. (Amake to tumar golpa khub bhalo lagalo). i am not a bengali so excuse me if i wrote it wrongly. this is the first time i read your story and can not wait to read all your stories. beautiful photo in the bio too. imagine your daughter? maa go!!!

One of the hottest stories I have ever read in literotica. I am a guy but i just love reading about lesbian encounters. Incest made this even hotter. Also wud love to have a boss like that. keep writtin.

Indranil(kolkata)

kinda racist but acceptable.

A delicious young body to jerk off to. I want to read this at bedtime with my little girl tonight...mmmmm