All Comments on 'N-Day on V-Day'

by YDB95

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
The funniest thing is.....

....that the immature jerks and punks who have failed to learn the lessons the author brutally reveals, would never, ever read a story like this one.

And if they accidentally did read this tale of sadsack losers, their ego's would never admit this story describes their pathetic lives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

They could spend the whole day in bed and ditch the plans they made! ;)

hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booabout 11 years ago

Lovely dialogue. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Tell Sarah and Matt's story?

There is no Sarah and Matt.

Nice story, it kind of lost the Romantic feel for a bit when Maggie was reminiscing about Matt. I could have done without that part, it leaves me feeling that she would leave Danny in a minute if Matt snapped his fingers at her. Yuk.

Jim44444Jim44444over 11 years ago
Looking forward to v-day

Maybe I can convince my wife on n-day for v-day. Probably not, but I can dream. This was a fun story and I can't recall any mistakes. It is refreshing that an author makes the effort to refine the story.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THAT IS NO CHOICE

more like a threat. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love this

You get 5 stars. Please tell Sarah and Matt's story.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous