All Comments on 'Nabbing Nina'

You need to lose some of the exclamation marks.

Keep them coming.............

how meny more storys are goign to be done about a helpless mom becomes a lesbina sex slave and and is not 100% with it but her daughter who is brought in gets all wet and hot seeing her mother be some dikes bitch and wants to join in and is 100% ok with it???

There was a lot of dry commentary for a hot story and not enough view of what's going on inside the victims' heads.

Just didn't hook me.

This is a great story, I would love to read more! Keep up the good work and leave the HEAT on!!!

We NEED more stories of helpless moms becoming lesbian sex slaves. And if she's not 100% with it, her daughter, who I hope is all wet and hot seeing her mother's submission to some dyke bitch, joins in... and is 100% ok with it!!!

Like I always say, we don't come here for literature or sophisticated sapphic poems. We come here for PORN! And you are the provider of some of the best! Keep at it, lusty.

opal nasty lady ............good job

Iloved it. I hope you go on with the younger sister brought into the group as well.

I hope that black bitch opal dies!

Very conservative woman more than nina. Won't do it. Needs discipline. Racist. Needs to be submissive. Hard job but worth it when a black bull is brought in front of a tied over bedpost with ass pussy totally exposed for 12 inch bbc to penetrate and stretch out forever. Once penetrated with flyswatter swatting her back and tits. She will have a huge orgasm and be totally broken for all time then she sees her niece dressed in black domne outfit swatting her ass and commanding her to fuck back. The happy couple would be left alone in bedroom watched by thhe white domne as breeding continues. Goal will be to impregnate her and take power of attorney over her assets which will e sold to opal and she will servenew roe as submissive to blacks with sister and niece who will bear black babies.

First, you should start by providing narration that gives us the perspective of the heroine, first and foremost. Remember the story is really Nabbing Nina, not, let me tell you what I heard a beautiful black woman did to an older woman an her daughter. For that reason, we must often get a glimpse and reaction dialogue and thoughts from Nina, as well as the necessary thoughts and dialogue from the villain.

Another thing to consider is three simple elements to a story like this. Reluctance, fear of the worst intentions and outcome and, related to reluctance but a separate issue, guilt over going lesbian when she is not (over getting turned on) . A woman who keeps getting slapped around and lashed is an instant lesbian with no reluctance or fear of being actually killed. Not paying attention to the above makes the story not stand out and be believable and memorable. All of the other stuff you got the hang of. I hope you are not being intentionally PC . If you are and that is the reason you don't make the above elements relevant, you will never write anything other than one-read, sexy action sex stories.

Keep up writing and thanks for your effort.

This story made me masturbate.

It made me masturbate

After being overpowered by the two black girls,.she will be stripped nude and tied over a chair splayed wide, belly on chair back with hands cuffed on bottom of chair leg before a black crop is handed to Tammy to start reddening her luscious white creamy bass. Tammy loves the chance to discipline her racist ass and beats it harder while being called inappropriate names by the humiliated aunt. Nona steps in to slap her sisters reddening face, takes off her panties, walks to the bathroom tonsil panties on toilet with unflushed piss to stuff in her sisters mouth as she is spanked by Tammy and the two black girls at the farm, a black man is called to inseminate the open splayed wide white woman who cares on piss filled panties until she is broken by the spanking and fucking of a lifetime to be collared and dragged to the farm where she will be made to carry cinder blocks from one area to another area by her Black master while getting ass swatted bathe two black girls using fly swatter. She.is led to farm shower where she showers with her Black master and is made to curb him clean before scrubbing herself clean and spending the night hungry fucking her Black master. Days spent working harder in the farm picking vegetables, cleaning farm animals such as horse's and living on two meals to lose the 25 pounds dictated by Opal from her 40 year old frame to match the Wright of the two 20 year old black girls

Getting humiliated by Nina and Tammy as she stands naked for inspection shoeing her thinning frame and swollen belly while being told to have the word slut branded on her white ass to make amends for past racism towards blacks.