All Comments on 'Naivety'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This was rape

Asking permission after he's already inside her? She repeatedly told him to stop during his unasked for foreplay. This is a male rape fantasy and belongs under the nonconsent category. Completely offensive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fucking rubbish

Shes so smart but does not worry about getting knocked up the writer is a wanker

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22over 10 years ago
Another gentle gem!!

Don't you just love naïve?? Something tells me she WILL appear the next day in equally "inappropriate" dress, probably wondering what a spanking feels like and how it might affect her arousal..... and I'm betting when red-bummed and bent over, she will make lots of noise as she is 'ravished'..... now that the bothersome cherry has been popped, I am sure Angela will become a MUCH more interactive flat mate.... especially if, to her own surprise, a publically spanked bottom lights her fire....don't you??

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