All Comments on 'Naked Mother Ch. 04'

Enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more, no problem there, but would you PLEASE stop referring to your ass as "butts"!! Besides the fact that "butt" is about the least sexy way possible to refer to your ass the other simple fact is the term is "butt", not "butts." A single "butt" includes BOTH glutes!

GAH!!!

:-)

With first poster ass or arse is far sexier,the teasing is great and I love the series. The son is showing far more control than I could,by now I would have hitched her little tennis skirt up around her waist eased her panties off and slipped her a shot right down the centre of her court.[It is Wimbledon at the moment afterall.]

Hot!! You need to continue this storyline. It is really getting interesting. Don't wait..do it now!!

Keep it going.

I've been enjoying your story since the beginning.

And yes like another poster said...butt is better than butts.

reading all of this series , got to one of the best so far , want more of the naked mother so keep it coming

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I read the first four chapters. I love the story line and I was hoping as the chapters progressed that the writing would become less juvenile, but, that did not happen. You also need an editor and it should be an experienced editor.

I love how Andy's mother is constantly observing the big bulge in the front of her kid's shorts. See, that's the thing. Most all mothers, maybe every last one of them, are secretly real interested in how their boy's "developed" between his legs. A mom has a very special affection for her male child's penis. When it's soft and just hanging down over his balls, mom thinks it's the cutest thing she's ever seen. When her boy's half-hard and getting harder, she's fascinated by the process. And when it's big and stiff and practically busting out of his pants--well, she loves him to pieces and she's a female, so her motherly cunt is running like a river. Now let's see if this gifted author has young Andy just shove that big fat hard on of his up where it does his mommy the most good. Guess where.

This kid is 22 years old but his mom talks to him like he is a 12 year old imbecile. I gave this story 3 + chapters and it doesn't get any better. You write like you are barely a teen-ager. Very juvenile.

really sensible, with an interesting plot and arousing sceneries. Very interested for the following chapters.

Nice to see author finds female armpits sexy. They are just oomph when wet and sweaty