All Comments on 'Naked Proposal Ch. 02'

by bigrimmstales

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NicoANicoAalmost 17 years ago
Finally!

Although a little short the developing story is as could be expected and clearly promising. I hope you will find the time to write the next chapter soon, so we can learn what will go on in Cloe's house.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please write up chapter 3

This is a brilliant story. I just have to know what you've got in store after the cliff hanger ending to Chapter 2. Please, please, please write up the next chapter. It is one of the most erotic stories I've read (along with the N.U.D.E. story). I know you wrote it years ago but I've only just found them. Thanks for all the stimulating ideas in your stories. Please keep writing!

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