by ladyhockey
I was reading, thinking this story was just okay until I got to the last line. I had to laugh really hard. It was a great ending.
But I have to admit I'm really intrigued by the main character. I do wish there was more to this story just so I could see more of him.
Agree totally with the last commentator. You've created a fantastic main character, though the over-all story was alright until the last line. Just goes to show Mr. Hockey isn't the only who knows how to play games. That he WAS a hockey player was what got my attention in the first place, being Canadian, playoff season just ending, and being a newly converted Ottawa Sens fan. I am so tired of the blasted American footballers (no offense to footballers or Americans, but you have to admit pretty much every jock in the stories you find here are on the football team).
It clearly meant as a stand-alone, but God damn it I want more about this guy.
Wow that ending was unexpected. More of the hockey character would be good