All Comments on 'Nan, Mom and Me Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Liked it, but...

A few things....1) Dan Jr. with his mom was already done in chapter 10. Chapter 11 was supposed to be about JD and his daughter Fran. 2) Wow, the original Nan is still alive and still sometimes joins in the fun with Dan Sr. and his mom? Let's go over the ages of everyone for chapter 11. We'll assume that there is an 18 year gap between each generation. Starting from the bottom: Dan Jr. and Fran are 18; JD and Gracie are 36; Dan Sr. is 54; his mom is 72. And least, and CERTAINLY not least,.... Nan is NINETY (90)!!! To me, that's more funny than anything. As I always say, whatever floats your boat. Maybe for a grand finale, we can have all seven family members in one giant orgy (just make sure to have Nan remove her dentures and have her Life Alert on standby). Of course, it goes without saying that at this point, Gracie should be pregnant with Dan Jr.'s baby. Whaddya think?

Kneese25Kneese25over 14 years ago
OMG LOL!!!

"All...senior...citizens...should...have...Life Alert."

Scotty209Scotty209over 14 years ago
Great

Great story and I love to see the whole family play together. Also want to add that senior ladies are great lovers. They have practiced and perfected the arts of love

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