All Comments on 'Nancy Porter's Journal: Endgame'

liked the ending and while the whole story could have used some tightening up, it was a good read

Thanks for finishing it up. Revenge is best served cold.

I just read the whole story, all 10 or so chapters, start to finish. I thought it was OUTSTANDING, mostly because of how realistically it was written. I could go on and on, but....from a fellow author, great job!

Good story. I really liked your writing style. Made the whole story interesting and engaging.

And I liked nancy's attitude. Gutsy and naive.

Thanks

This kind of story- BDSM and coercion- doesn't ordinarily hit me in my wheelhouse. Usually the loving wives category is what works for me. But your writing style snagged me from very early in, and it just got better and better. I had expected Nancy to be welcomed by the professor and gently initiated into the joys of sex as a willing participant, so the blackmail was off-putting as well. You hooked me by telling the story so beautifully. A reader KNOWS Nancy in a way that few writers here manage. It takes talent and intuition to manage the buildup perfectly. Sometimes we get lost and want to get to the action and most often there isn't enough back story. You nailed it!

You mentioned that this is your least favorite story. I can hardly wait to read the good ones! Really, this is well done- superb! Thank you!