by ProfessorPanty
This was about as loving of a deflowerment as I think could ever happen. My own was a horrible experience and I would have given anything for it to be like this. I loved the way Kyle got to see her cherry and the way she got her dream. This is a terriffic chapter and I loved it.
I'm going to have to go back and read the whole series now. This is probably one of the best written stories about a brother and sister that I've ever read. How nice it is to find an author that is articulate and erotic at the same time. But, whoa! What's going on with the mother? And what's the idea of ending the chapter like that?
Incredible, Incredible, Incredible, Incredible !
don't make him fuck his mother; let that act remain a fantasy. i hope their relationship continues to be exclusive. in reference to ch.04, she could get jealous of her mother, and he could get jealous of his lesbian friend touching her. I REALLY HOPE 3RD PARTIES DON'T GET INVOLVEd. :D
just first class. I am glad pt6 is already posted. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
Nope, nope, it's become obvious the pay off you promised doesn't interest you. You glossed over it so you can get back to the kinky shit. You're a tease and not in a good way.