All Comments on 'Nasty Nancy Ch. 01'

I was going to dig the skeletons out of their closets and find out all of their secrets. I was going to turn those bitches into dogs and make them eat their own shit. I would turn them into my little playthings and make them beg for mercy. And when they would ask for mercy I would show them none. Picturing those women cowering in fear and crying out in pain brought a smile to my face.

Thats a good summation of what i like to see in a story. Please take us there. Show us how they are feeling as it happens. Don't passively tell. Show.

Nice setup by the way. I can't wait to see what happens.