All Comments on 'Nate & I Ch. 03'

Wow the first and second parts of Nate and I just had me GOING. Going as in horny and going as in indulged in the story line. Very well written. I can only applaud this, keep it up! And hope this isn't the end...

I'm really enjoying this story. This chapter was pretty hot. I won't say keep it up because you have already written 4 & 5 but I look forward to reading them.

I like how they are trying to be more than friends.

This is such a sweet story! I love it! =^.^=

There seemed to be a cloud over their declaration as boyfriends. Like Nate isn’t sure what he really wants. Nate barely acknowledges Oliver when anyone else is around. I get that in HS there are peer pressures but no one deserves to be someone’s dirty little secret and it seems like that’s how it’s shaping up for Oliver. Plus like it or not, Oliver’s easy forgiveness of Nate’s earlier behavior upset the balance in their relationship. Subconsciously or not, Nate sees that he doesn’t have to give Oliver the respect he deserves and Oliver tolerates that.

Anon 1 year ago,

It's only been 2 weeks in the story universe, and it's a high school setting. Stop forcing the characters in your super express train and just be logical for once.