by bbkradwell
You spelt Laugh wrong. You spelt it like this: Laff. As if. It is Laugh and Laughed. You can't spell. Go back to school and earn GCSE'S and A Levels in English - so you know how to spell and write.
I think that people should be allowed to make small mistakes and other people shouldn't be too harsh.
The story was good, light and fun. Too many stories take sex too seriously. Sex is supposed to be fun.
I think the person who gave you a "0" is an idiot him/her self! "Spelt?" As if. It's "SPELLED!" I think that imbecile should go back to school and get her/his/"its" own GED, or whatever the fuck it said BB should get! I give the story a full "100!" I would love to have a 3-way with BB and Nat! If you two are ever in Australia, please look me up! I'll send you my address if you'd like.
Great story!
I, for one, really loved this story. I have long had a "thing" for lactating women as well (as if there's a thing as lactating men?)LOL
Anyway, I think you should write more about Nat and her anal-sex-loving body.
Merry Christmas to all and to all, good sex!
I still don't care what these other assholes say, I liked that story! Nat's a lucky girl to have you for a lover.
Thank you for writing that story.
The wording of it and the way you described everything that happened was just a huge turn off. F-.
The "wording?" WTF does THAT mean?
I've received comments that have stated the exact opposite!
Come on, people... Can't you at least be honest in your critiques?
---BB
I thought it was well-wriiten and light-hearted. Sexy too! Good read.