by Lazarus
Glenn better be a fast healer, or come up with a damned convincing explanation for the scars on his back. Unless Bonnie's an idiot.
Great story, love the context and characters. However you use 'Naturalist' when you mean either Naturist or Nudist.
the significant others are getting better acquainted back at home? Good start for a few more chapters. I'll watch for them.
The author needs to learn the difference between a "naturist" and a "naturalist".
The author needs to learn the differences between a naturalist and a naturist.
A naturalist is someone who studies nature.
A naturist is a nudist without fences, someone who enjoys the nude lifestyle without belonging to a club.