All Comments on 'Natural Cruise'

by Lazarus

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ErotonautErotonautalmost 17 years ago
What happens on the cruise, stays on the cruise?

Glenn better be a fast healer, or come up with a damned convincing explanation for the scars on his back. Unless Bonnie's an idiot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Effort!

Looking forward to the continuation of the cruise.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One small point

Great story, love the context and characters. However you use 'Naturalist' when you mean either Naturist or Nudist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Do you suppose

the significant others are getting better acquainted back at home? Good start for a few more chapters. I'll watch for them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wrong words

The author needs to learn the difference between a "naturist" and a "naturalist".

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Definitions

The author needs to learn the differences between a naturalist and a naturist.

A naturalist is someone who studies nature.

A naturist is a nudist without fences, someone who enjoys the nude lifestyle without belonging to a club.

bouncingboobsbouncingboobsover 8 years ago
Wow

What good friends

colin23colin23over 7 years ago
Wrong word

Naturists, not naturalists.

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