All Comments on 'Nature's Light Show'

That was just beautiful. Intercutting the intensity of the storm with the growing intensity of the passion was executed perfectly. A stunningly sensual story. I'd love to see more of your work.

A wonderful idea and well written. Very erotic :)

I can't wait for the next summer rain storm..........

Loved the intensity! Keep it up! :)

The power of the storm! I liked the unbridled passions. Good imagery. Nicely done.