All Comments on 'Naughty on the Dance Floor'

by Sean Renaud

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Pearl_Prynne about 19 years ago

Very hot, urgency well done

Pacing of the story was good, with enough details to visualize the action but just few enough to tease. Panties/no panties was not a big deal. Fun story!

lady_hawke56 almost 17 years ago

Wonderful build up and passionate release

There is something about the urgency of love making and the climatic release, that can take a reader there.

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