All Comments on 'Negotiations'

by magmaman

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bruce22bruce22almost 11 years ago
Tsk , Tsk

I admit that to chew on such a delectable tale in the erotic mode is strange, but if it was my deal I would tell the truth take a holiday day and pay for the room. This was one of those cases of being great except for the last few lines...

Jim44444Jim44444almost 11 years ago
Great story.

Yes he screwed the company but it will never make up for as much as they will screw him. Thanks for writing.

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6', 186#, published writer. I have worn many hats. As a young man I was crazy, carefree and making wads of money. Then along came a messed up war and I was cannon fodder. From there I came home even crazier, and survived a 120 MPH crash which got me 15 years in a wheelchair...