by bigfoot12
This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read! Jessica is probably number one on my list of literotica babes and she hasn't even fucked yet! Excelent job! Please write another one though.
You've managed two excellent chapters in a story with the characters not even having sex yet! Now thats an achievement - achievement enough that i'm actually commenting, which is a rarity.
Keep them cuming in the same style and format, and you'll get a 5/5 from me everytime.
Better developed story line than most on Literotica. Very sexy female lead - someone any man would give up a nut to know intimately. Thanks, and keep up the good work.
i loved this story and can't wait to read more... i hope you are going to be writing ch.3 very soon...
Wow awesome I've been readin some story for a bit, but I guess I'm a bit of a critic, yours was great it had a classy quality to it, The young lust and possible future love, hell end it when you feel the need but let get married or left with that possibility...I am my self a 40 something good lookin man and hung but that doesn't matter what does is this great story that I have lived a few times...thanks bigfoot
A good story, I would have preferred that it move a little faster but that's just me. Keep on writing for us. Thank you.
Best descriptions of HJ & BJ I can recall. Erotic prolonged excitement with every sentence. I sure would like to read the next chapter. This would be a great time to knock off the neighbor!