All Comments on 'Neighbor Love'

by kaliandy24

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Rubbish

Pity you did not spend more time in college learning proper English spelling and grammar...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Disappointment...

The firrst in the series was good with intrigue, mystery and allure. Perhaps too rushed, or lacking in a plot this time. Redo/rework, or something. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
quite bad

Poor pacing, poor grammar. No plot. The girl is dumb as rocks. Not even remotely realistic, even as far as erotica goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i loved your story!

people love to be negative, and be anonymous.

i hope you decide to write more, if not just for me!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Wonderful. Hot. Please write more. DWH

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