by m_storyman_x
Great story! I loved the twist ending. It would be fun to continue this story at least a chapter or 2 until maybe Jenny figures out the original twist and then it could leave off as a happily ever after fun with the young neighbor lady.
Very arousing for an old man. A bit longer that I usually like but there no distractions with repeating scenes and it flows well throughout.
Hmm, who seduced who, lots of fun for a lucky guy. Loved the shower scene as I enjoy shower sex, I find washing a woman's body so erotic.
Couple of slips; Roger or Robert during sex, especially during cumming! Could be an issue if thought about if the couple think there is more to the fantasies being played out.
I really liked this, and then the twist at the end changed it to loving it. Very well done.