All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 02'

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yesterdaysyesterdaysover 10 years ago
enjoying this story

5 stars. Looking forward to the next chapters.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 10 years ago
Neighbourhood Dad.

Damn thats hot! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!

I liked both stories in this series...and I want some physicality!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Monkey's

Kind of like the "No More Monkey's Bouncing on the Bed" series.

Excellent so far !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cannot wait for more

Very enjoyable and leaves me wanting more. PLEASE do not become an author who drops a story for a long period of time or completely. Your style of writing is very enjoyable, believable and enticing. More please.

woody1230woody1230over 10 years ago

nice build up. awaiting chapter 3.

litereader54litereader54over 10 years ago
Great 2nd

Keep the story going! Very good writing. Slow build.

ammomanammomanover 10 years ago
Well written, and ...

Interesting tale. It keeps one interested in all events without being about base sexuality. The mind of the father is very well represented. He cares, is interested; but, also fears being too obvious. He walks that narrow path of interested, but fears he will over step his self-imposed boudaries. I look forward to continuing chapters. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's nice to read a *story* now and then.

Please keep going. I suspect I know where this is going, but not 100% sure and that's a good thing. I want to enjoy the ride.

CallMeABritCallMeABritover 10 years ago
nice start

building slowly, and leaving us guessing exactly how this will pan out. Encore!

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
MORE!!!

This is really good

ramonbrookramonbrookover 10 years ago
Very nice build up of the

Characters and the sexual tension! I hope you plan on writing many chapters of this story. Because I don't want to stop reading!

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
interesting so far

but it seems to be dribbling out a little bit at a time.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 10 years ago
Mind that Matters

A MIND IS A TERRIBLE THING TO WASTE, and HIS IS WORKING OVERTIME!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love it!

Great writing! I love the slow build up. I also like a sense of humour, I've been chuckling out loud while I've been reading.

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Little Henry is a Southerner who is bored with writing lame magazine articles and wants to have some fun for a change. His fiction writing ranges far and wide from these erotic stories, an attempt at "the great American novel" and even a children's book.

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