All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 07'

Paige could not be that blind to the attraction between her dad and Randi. Maybe Paige needs to let him know its okay on her part as well -- that she wouldn't feel like he was betraying her mother -- and would not have a problem if something develops between him and Randi. (I hope that made sense.)

Thought you weren't going to write anymore chapters, great chapter can't believe people rush you them having sex, me personally like the slow build up , but it's a great story line so keep up the good work , looking forward to more chapters

You should have trusted your instinct, and let the tension between Randi and Mr. D develop more slowly.

I want you to be you. Great series. I had a minor episode when I checked today and saw five new chapters. You da-you da best.

Never feel forced to write something you and your muse did not want. This is YOURS not ours and we should not pressure the writer, just follow along and enjoy the pleasure of reading and letting our imagination run wild.

Again thanks.

So far, after 7 chapters, I have not noticed any spelling or punctuation errors. Not that I am looking but it's unusual and that leaves me free to enjoy the story. Wish I were 38 again!

Such a sweet story, but I'm sorry that the author felt pressured to take it faster than they wanted.