All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 08'

was afraid you would stop @ 7 glad you didn't , hope you have many more chapters:)

Had lost this story for months. Now you have my attention again. Please keep going.

I am really liking this story, but I hope it does not devolve into chapters on basketball games, which is interesting, but hardly food for the soul. Hmmmm, longer chapters would be lovely too.

No, I won't turn this into a sports book. Like J.K. Rowling feeling the need to include a quidditch match in her books, it seemed necessary to show the coach in his own element.

Plus, I've had a couple of women tell me they knew they were falling in love while watching me playing guitar. Seeing someone have success in their field is an aphrodisiac to many -- hell, I've seen the pretty girl in the bar flirting with the ugly guy with the pool stick.

Seeing the coach pull out a win must seem like magic to those in the stands.

Someone commented about wanting longer chapters. Nope, not gonna happen.

I like short chapters -- and it keeps me writing.

Also, I work as a writer; there are only so many hours in a day/week that I can spend in front of a monitor before my eyes wear out (and my butt too).

I and I suspect most other readers, don't read stories on this site to get "their sports fix". I am not interested in the bouncy ball stuff, get back to Randi. Notice how that chapter had the highest score?

Good to see you continuing this story, personally I don't care if the chapters are one or ten pages long as long as you put them up in a decent pace. By that I mean more then one in two months I just like to see the stories come to a finish

Keep at it LH. This is a fantastic story. If you guys are so sex crazed, put on a hardcore porn or go onto adult friend finder where you can get it faster than a pizza. LH remember, great talent has often been criticized by mediocrity and small mindedness.

Your heads in the game, don't lose it after the game. Unless your alone. A very natural feel to this story, I forget we are in high school.

Good bye!