All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

I love how you have written this story I am sorry that you felt pressured in to putti fb sex into the story before you felt it was ready but I am glad that you did not put it in the chapters since then just work it in at your own pace it feels natural that they are not getting together all of a sudden and fucking like rabbits for every chapter. Thank you for the wonderful read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

whole series great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I agree!

I agree with 'great story'. I felt a bit teary after this chapter. I felt happy that it wasn't a one off for them, but would have another build up to their next time together. I really feel for the characters. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hmmm....

Theres at least one good innuendo per chapter, keep it up .!

roveroneroveronealmost 8 years ago
Really enjoying this storyline!

Very likable characters, great dialogue and plot.

The boink in 6 seemed rushed but think it's time for some more contact...

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Little Henry is a Southerner who is bored with writing lame magazine articles and wants to have some fun for a change. His fiction writing ranges far and wide from these erotic stories, an attempt at "the great American novel" and even a children's book.

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