All Comments on 'Neighborly Lust, Maid Service'

I stopped reading at the 2nd, and I use the term loosely, sentence. "Carole is a chubby but attractive mother of three and a dedicated wife her husband Tom but she was craving more." If I "writer" can't be bothered to even try writing what should be a simple sentence, they're work is not worth reading.

I know at least a few will view me as a prick, but ask yourself is my statement is not true.

I know, I know. I should have proofread my own comment before I blasted someone for not proofreading their work.

never mind the anonymous idiots, this is a terrific story. the details about the uniform and how excited she was to go anal were especially hot. and I can never get enough of that sexy dialog. great job!

you had me until you mention "bowels" during anal sex play.

I wonder how many stories 'anonymous USA' has actually posted? Sounds a bit of a pillock to me! Ignore such pathetic and totally unhelpful criticism pal and keep up the good work. I and I am sure, plenty of others, enjoy your stories.

I liked it. Get a younger guy into the frame too. Let him fuck this milf hard. Let him be quite young. 20-22.

Just a simple whore in a bad story.