All Comments on 'Neighbors'

Nice build. Good story.

Nice story--Well told and good hot passion building to sensuous sex!

Great job!

im so wet now after readin that. wish my neighbor was fit lol

A very erotic story!

The story line wasn't very original but I could still get into it, except that the writing was poor. The author jumped around leaving gaps in how things would've transpired. Please in the future slow down and think about how each situation would progress and give the details to support that. If that had been done, I would've scored it higher and enjoyed it more.