All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 06'

by Machu_Gamesmas

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 10 years ago
Machu

I'm loving this.

Well written, descriptive, sensual....

And a good Dom in the making?

Perfick

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Such a good chapter. He does seem to be getting into the 'swing' of being a Dom lol. But you left us hanging....post next chapter quickly please

Machu_GamesmasMachu_Gamesmasalmost 10 years agoAuthor

I have chapter seven in the works already :) and it seems to be flowing onto the page a bit easier than Six had. I think the writer block I had experienced was more due to having the beginnings of seven already in my head, and that made it difficult to try connecting the two chapters, more than anything else!

I am very happy that the story has been enjoyed. I hope I can add some excitement while still keeping the story line flowing.

It may be time to introduce the two women? We will see where my mind goes next ;)

Machu

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
Awesome chapter!

Well done...just the right pace...the cliffhanger...GAWD I cannot wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Where's the next episode ? Good writing.

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