All Comments on 'Never Would Have Imagined'

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bruce22bruce22almost 12 years ago
Attractive Romantic Story

You made it sound real!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
i read all of your work

well done each deserved a 4 or 5 star again well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

You're right: Unbelievable. On the other hand, perhaps believable. Perhaps that is why the guys from Ann Arbor drove to Toledo.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IMAGINATION NEVER COMPETES AGAINST REALITY

and if you were there, it happened. TK U MLJ LV NV

MsQuoteMsQuotealmost 12 years ago
Lovely!

What a hot and charming story. However, I would have left out this sentence: Now here is where the store gets a little unbelievable, according to my friends; but I swear that this is the way it happened.

Your friends weren't there to witness, plus, I think we all come to expect "unbelievable" in erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Much

...better.

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