All Comments on 'New Beginnings'

it is a slow start to a tale. building to a tale. you should have wrote more

to start your tale. not much to rate on.

It's good to read a story that has developed characters and the promise of future intimacy instead of all the ones where people just jump right into sex. I'm looking forward to more of this story line ... rated a 5 for excellent writing

Your skills as a writer shines through the comfortable words written for the entrance to you story, as a fan of romance series, you have all the potential here for a great one. Relaxed pace only makes it much more enjoyable, Italian restaurant setting, the wine and after dinner walk coupled with a promise for more makes this story special! Thanks! :) Smiling Jaybird :)

Another one sterts thrn stop take up writing kiddy stores dont put this rubbish on the great site dick head

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to next submissions.

Nice sweet and comfortable start to a relationship. Look forward to seeing the continuation of this series, find out what happened to break up their earlier relationship and how they deal with any perceived echoes from the past.