All Comments on 'New Friends'

by rogue01

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Becky?

Who is Becky??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

written by a woman, or a pussy-whipped cucky boy, either way complete crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Becky is the name of the wife.

Didn't really like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Excellently written, you set each scene wonderfully - There was some confusion with names but I really loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Waist, not waste. Sheesh!

Might be worth getting someone to proofread it.

Friskee_cplFriskee_cplover 10 years ago
Not bad at all.

Ignore the cuck comments, that gutless prick always makes them anonymously. I also got a bit lost with the names. Becky or Rhiannon? Who is who? Otherwise a solid effort and please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
huh?

Waste and throws.... illiterate

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Of course Friskee_cpl is a fag

and wants the men to suck each other off.

What a fagtoid!

1* for the cuck lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Of course she loves him

Yeah. Right. The cheque's in the mail too.

meddlesomemeddlesomeover 10 years ago
Complaining about a few typos?

Losers. Ignore them. I enjoyed the story. Keep writing, rougue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wife?

does he have two wives there Becky or Rihanna?

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