by tiffanymanners
I'd of liked an ending with misss olivia be the mistress and brian as a good friend. This is a weird ending which aint any realistic.
What do you mean where Olivia gets revenge? Tim was the one who got fucked over. Olivia should be made a slave as well, the careless bitch...
How about a revenge story for Olivia against Brian where she get Jess back
Could do with a middle. Explaining what happend in the two months since they left the bar, you have a great start and a good end now add the middle?
please, write more about "Jess", and Brian, and Olivia then,.......i want some hot sex with Jess and Brian!!!