All Comments on 'New Outlook'

Mr. Grey Eagle, you've written good stories. A series of stories proved that you have great imagination. But, would you mind sparing a little more fancy on building the appearance of that old man? I don't want to fancy a shadow doing what the old man did in the story to me.

I beg you, please.

Delicious and delightful -- makes the reader almost as HOT

as those two lovers! WWWooooEEE! I sure hope that you write about Peek and Jeff again -please??

It took a lot of guts to write and publish a piece of bull snit like this.

She has bailed on her husband full time at this stage and it will get worse -

Not that he is not equally to blame - he is but this is not the most ethical way to handle all of this - the husband has not been heard so we have no real clue what his response is or his reasons.

Interesting treatment of a real issue - it happens to men and women

Surprising journey without all of the angst and uncertainty of the dating game. Too bad high school 'health/sex' classes aren't as straightforward and simple. A lot of trauma could have been avoided.