All Comments on 'New York'

Good story. More, please.

So is she his girlfriend or wife? You go back & forth on that

If this is it, the ending is rather incomplete. If it is to be continued you have "treated" me with one of my pet peeves - no indication at the beginning of the story or at the end that more is to come.

Very good I want to read more

All feedback is appreciated. This is actually my first shot ever of writing erotica so I wasn't sure if I would continue the story or not. Looks like I should get back to work on a chapter 2 or something.

Twisted and hot. Definitely noncon. Please continue.

I agree that you should write some more.

You've painted a lovely scenario.

This story can go places. Delicious interracial humiliation of Krista by a young black woman who knew her from college as a racist bitch looking down on blacks after too many Fox TV news on their welfare and drug misdeeds. Hogtied Krista sees her former friend withh a stud black bf and takes action to humiliate her by making her suck 12 inches of bf's rod before he busts her out wide. Then her domne has her hair changed into black hair dyed from brown with ringed tits and a good cunt licker to all present. Krista's bf is changed into a faggot by one of the gay/bi men. In the end Krista is changed from a conservative young woman to a whore black bred to serve as pregnant slut for black babies and slave to her domne and black bf.1

Excellent story! Delicious interracial humiliation of Krista by a young fat white woman who knew the skiiny black bitch from college. Krista was a racist who watch too much CNN and was now being put back in her place by white Momma!!!

This story can go places. Delicious class warfare humiliation of Krista by a young communist woman who knew her from Spanish civil war as a facist bitch looking down on labourers after too much capitalism, Hogtied Krista sees her former friend withh a stud revolutionary bf and takes action to humiliate her by making her suck 12 marxist inches of bf's rod before he busts her out wide. Then her domne has her hair changed into red hair dyed from brown with hammer and sickle tattoo and a good cunt licker to all present. Krista's bf is changed into a faggot by one of the gay/bi men. In the end Krista is changed from a facist young woman to a whore black bred to serve as pregnant slut for revolutionary babies and slave to her domne and marxist bf.1

Am I doing it right?

I enjoyed the story, please continue!