by BelleHoney
Oh no, no, no! The description of the bedroom and bathroom is too much - I wish these characters all the luck in the world, but I can't read about a guy with such bad taste!
This is a great continuation of your first chapter. The only problem is that you might want to edit further chapters before posting them. I found many errors that could easily be corrected. Other than that, your characters seem to be developing well.
Great story You seem to understand that GAY men also have a romantic side same as Lesbians its just not sex ther is fore play and romance leading up to sex and the sex can be very gentle and loveable