All Comments on 'Nic in the Nick'

Absolutely loved it and can hardly wait for the results of the video being released. May all those scumsuckers burn in hell! Very, very well done.

Nothing else needs to be said ....this was a great story

Very good writing and story.

Some minor typos but not enough to harm the reading.

I did get a kick out of the events and characters supposedly from the United States when reading and realizing the dialogue was British or I take it after seeing the Bio, Australia.

The differences were obvious in the first paragraph. It made the story even more interesting with the diverse slang used.

Dinner tonight would be out of the freezer and a packet, and then a bit of relax time in front of the TV before bed.

Dinner tonight would be out of the freezer and a box, and then a relaxing time in front of the TV before bed.

Panel beater instead of body and fender man

Mum instead of Mom

Chief warder instead of Warden

Warder instead of guard

Very good writing and looking forward to your next story

Thank you

Thanks for the comments people.

I was aware the slang etc. was going to be a bit out (we say thinners, you say reducer etc) but it had to set where the death penalty is used and we do not have it in Australia.

Please keep the comments coming as we all love to hear what you guys think

BB1212

This was really good. Quite an unusual theme, and well executed. Was hoped for some continuation though.

In your bio you say you're not a real writer...bullshit...stop fooling yourself and get serious....you are wasting an obvious talent if you do not pursue writing as a full time career. This is an excellent story, totally believable characters and an engrossing story. Got me right in and I could really identify with all the characters. Got to go and read another of your submissions. After reading several of your submissions all I can say is, don't stop...and get serious about making a good living as a writer.

very, very unique story. would love to read more. i can see why some people are jealous! don't let the sour grapes get you down...

Uplifting? Yes. Well written? Absolutely. Was the ending correct? Only way it could end (but I kept hoping for a miracle).

A marvelous, rich, and moving story. Thanks! ohio

The story was well above the average. I'd have given more stars if it had been possible. I would have liked a different ending but the the story line probably wouldn't allow it. Thanks for a great story.

WOW If you aren't still writing please start again!! If you are writing-where is it???

so much more than my simple comment could convey. I'm astounded at how fantastic this read was.. visceral, loving, justice and redemption. Thank You.

I would have liked to have had a follow-up about all the crooked cops and judges that got into trouble but you and I know that as entrenched as they are they will be allowed to resign etc., as usual. Life in America rarely changes.

I agree that a follow up to see the results and revenge but considering the speed of prosecution, the story would have to be "years long"!

I enjoyed the story and will read more of your work. Well done.

A great read, not good on the legal and prison stuff biut it's a story.

You made me cry..........bill

you need an editor and an agent ... seriously. The conception of the story, the blendings along the way, the pacing, the characters acting out their roles in totally believable ways -- all are extraordinary.

and the sexual scenes are believable and not gratuitous in the least.