All Comments on 'Nice Neighbors Ch. 01'

by Lauries Husband

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start!

I'm glad to see you are back to writing about Laurie and your adventures with her. This story seems promising and I can't wait until the family gets to play together with their new friends completly! Your best story was your New Year's Eve series by far and I can't wait to read more like it! I'd say if you filed your story under the incest category rather than novella, you'd get more reads maybe seeing that the majority of the stories on this site are incest based. Just suggestions of course, you do things amazingly already so don't let my words (or others) sway you too far aside.

P.S. Don't hold back on any of the bi stuff! I'd love to see Steve get used to the point they redefine the word!

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