All Comments on 'Nice Substitute'

Excellent writing! A real treat with a different twist!

You played nicely with the two storyline. The characters are vivid, the sex is hot and hardcore! Thanks!

Loved it

Great writing!

Witty, hot, well-constructed, did I mention hot?

That was by far one of the best stories I've read on Literotica in a long, long time! I'd love to read more about the dirty adventures of Penny - she made herself out to be such a "nice" girl that was corrupted to take her bosses' neighbour up her arse, but actually was QUITE dirty: what if she's done similar things in the past while still maintaining that "good girl" persona?

Loved it

DownUnderGuy

got off two times

It's not just sexy - you are a brilliant writer!

1st time I've ever felt compelled to comment GREAT story

The sex is hardcore, the characters are vivid, and you even managed to build up a second story line with the porn movie. You played it well! I think I just found a new favourite :)

"If you haven't seen Pirate Slut 3, it has a lot in common with Pirate Slut 1 and Pirate Slut 2 though personally I believe it's the finest part of the Pirate Slut trilogy. And if you haven't seen them they have a lot in common with every other porn flick ever made. "

Could not stop laughing.

Great story! Fine writing!

Easily the best story I have read in a very long time. Please write a sequel or series

THIS is what erotic writing is supposed to be! Well done! Look forward to reading more of your work!

Story-within-as-story, and told with perfect timing and rhythm. I look forward to the next thousand nights of storytelling! As other posts have said, this was stellar writing! Can't be read without leaving a comment. Please, more sir.

So well done, great pace, very very sexy...

I have a fantasy that is so similar! Have you read my mind? Bravo.

I want more of this !

Well told.

Would have liked some more foreplay with teasing, and edging before they got to the main ass fuck.

The best pirate slut story ever.