All Comments on 'Nicholas' Bargain Ch. 06'

It's great to finally see chapter 6 posted. And a good one at that. I loved it. Well worth the wait, but I wasn't expecting the ending of this chapter. You're supposed to be calming things down and finishing the story, not adding more action to it. I know you split this chapter, and hope that you will submit chapter 7 quickly. It would be a shame if you made us wait for it, even though it is finished. Don't know what Mika is playing at, but I guess we'll find out soon. :)

Thanks for reading. Don't worry, it will end smoothly in the next part! There were no rules when I started writing this, I went with the flow, so I wouldn't like to confine myself to calming it down and having that be the end as that wouldn't be satisfying for me to write.

I intended to leave it at the last chapter but received feedback that people wanted a further closing chapter and didn't want to do the usual - they get married, the end - as that was a given with how the last part ended :)

I was shocked to see this chapter after so long, what a nice surprise!

Happy with the latest chapter I've got you in my favorite author list

Nooooooo!! Nicholas & Lara were supposed to get married & have lots of demon babies GAAAH

FYI, the French word for prince is prince (pronounced more like prahnce).

Other than the nitpick, I'm excited to see where this is going! It has been one of my favorite stories.

LaChatteNoire, re the surname name Armel - I was sure to check and double check when researching his name. Armel is a surname of French origin meaning 'warrior prince' or 'stone prince' or some places state the meaning as simply 'prince'. It's not the prince used in French speaking as you mentioned but it seems to be an ancient surname. That is, of course, unless the places I researched on got it wrong?! (I checked a handful of sources). If so, you have my apologies :)

Thank you so much for deciding to finish this story! Still loving it. But I agree that they are supposed to be having demon babies right now! :-) I'm really excited for the next chapter. I don't know what Mika is up to but I can't wait to see what Nicholas does to him for messing with Lara. Please post again soon! 5 stars. ~K.

I am so glad I found this story. All I can say is one word...."AWESOME". Can't wait for the next chapter and looking forward to how this story will end.

This story has developed so nicely. I've been reading it none stop since I read it. Please add more soon.

Please continue your tale...very intriguing!