All Comments on 'Night Hunt'

U should diffenitly add more to the store

Thanks, glad you like it! It's my first time trying to write something. Would appreciate any feedback.

The actual sex scene was dry. It felt as though he just entered her once and that was it. The story over all is great and I enjoyed reading it; my only disappointment was the sex scene. Still, please continue the story.

Not a bad start im interested in reading more

He is worried about his next meal. He had not had any blood in three days, and the one before that was a sick ( drying, sleeping ) homeless man.