All Comments on 'Night in the Library'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
cheap tease

Why waste our time?

William smythWilliam smythabout 12 years ago
Not a waste of time!

Just a well written prelude to what promises to be a nice adventure.

After all the author did say......to be continued.

sensualwhisperssensualwhispersabout 12 years ago
ok

It's ok but the over use of the word I made it tedious. A wider use of language and more emotional feed back would have made this a more rounded story.

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