All Comments on 'Night Job Ch. 05'

I'm starting to realize this story is very similar to my own in how my Dom came to own me. Although I'm sure it won't end the same way that my relationship with my owner will; I have every intention of reading this until the end to see what happens.

what is it... you can't leave me hanging!!

Aah! The suspense. What is the seat? What are the statements? I can't wait for the next installment.

Very well written, it has the feel of almost being true. Is it? Or just your fantasy and need to submit?

I love your writing. You keep me waiting and wanting more. Is this truly fiction? Whether it is or isn't, I am really enjoying it. Thank you for sharing your talent!! I can't wait to see what happens.

I absolutely love this series! Your style of writing is wonderful. I love reading how he's easing her into submission. I remember when I was starting my 24/7 D/s relationship and how he trained me to be what he wanted and needed. It was a wonderful experience. I can't wait to read further to see where this leads. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Please keep writing.One question why did you write in first person, not third person?

Good story.

Get an editor though. Would help immensely.

:D waiting for the next chapter read the whole series twice already!!! lmao

Please continue to write more in this series. The last chapter was excellent, thank you!

I'm looking forward to the next one :-)