All Comments on 'Night Swim'

by Silvermouse

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I'm so wet now

The event that took place here are almOst identical to a memory of mine, that happened 25 years ago. Well done

SilvermouseSilvermouseover 13 years agoAuthor

That would be about right...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Fantastic story. Best I've read for a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This may be the best story I have read. Wonderful character development

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
awesome awesome story

Simple, yet wonderfully erotic. Nothing feels far-fetched or out of the ordinary. There's enough description to be engrossing, yet enough is left to the imagination that the story doesn't feel like spoon-feeding.

Plus it's just damn hot

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50about 13 years ago
Excellent story

You had just the right touch to end this little beauty of a tale. Considering the jerk off fantasy of the situation, this was very well done. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading the stories you have offered so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Less Is More

This story carefully keeps in bounds of the "realistic," or maybe better, the "plausible," if those terms apply in sexual fantasy, in suggesting character and action without too much describing. Nice writing, Silvermouse. I'll be reading more stories if you post them.

abc101abc101over 12 years ago
good story

I really enjoyed this story. Please write more.

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
Special.!

As an ignorant Australian, what is a TAs.

Did like the story.

SilvermouseSilvermousealmost 11 years agoAuthor
TA

TA is a teaching assistant, a graduate student who teaches the 'hands on' part of the course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A great nightswim for 3

Fun night's swim for a frat nerd and two coeds.

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